the mysterious man

“Quick, come on something just crashed down the street.” As we arrive mike and I see a huge man in a white van. “What happen?” “Oh nothing you kids just go on home.” The man in black said. As we walked away we can see he hit something, a truck loaded with an unknown supplies in it. We went to tell the man but he was already in the van and that was when we notice a body shaped figure in the window. Right as he pulls away we realized what has happen could he be a kidnapper.

4 thoughts on “the mysterious man”

  1. Hi Chase! I really like your story and I really liked your title, which immediately got me hooked because I love mysteries. Overall I give your story a 9.5. Keep up the good work!
    From your friend,
    Colin F.

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